Last week I got the chance to go to San Francisco State because my friend had to pick up some documents. So she left me alone to roam around the Science department building. I found this flyer on the Anthropology Department's bulletin board.

In the second line the comma after students should be removed, and a period should be added. Also the comma after there should be deleted as well.
My manager at work made me do some skill building exercises. This is one of the handouts she gave me. This handout is distributed to all the Payless Shoes Sources in the nation.


For line number five, today is spelled wrong.
This is a handout of guidelines for oral presentations in my Japanese class.


For the first sentence of this page many items needed to be inserted and some deleted to make it flow more smoothly. It should read "First, find your partner who you will work with. Basically, there has to be two members, but if the class is odd in the number of students, you can chose to perform the oral quiz in a group of three."

1) 2x4 pts.=8 pts
ReplyDelete2) 4 pts.
3) 4x4 pts.=16 pts.
28 points total (25 Copy Edit the World, 3 bonus). Good job!